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新东方雅思写作语料库:人们如何处理生活和事业的矛盾

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2016-01-20 13:49作者:薛鹏来源:新东方网字号:| 【工作类】人们难以平衡生活和事业的原因和解决策略 Currently,many people fail to balance the work with the other parts oflives, what are the reasons and how to solve it? 现在,一些人难以平衡工作和生活的其他部分,原因何在,如何解决?(2012年3月8日) 【头脑风暴】 “我只想按照自己内心的想法去生活,为何这也如此艰难?”有时候,我们想要上升,却又缺乏力量,我们想要后退,又不甘心,欲求而不得的焦躁,正是人生的困顿所在。“吾欲乎遑遑欲何之。”我的心啊,你为何如此不安宁,我的人生,你到底要走向哪里?只是,无论生活如何困顿、迷茫,只要我们还在为梦想奋力的路上,明天的太阳就一定是美丽的。 【写作目的】本篇将会探究下人们未能处理家庭和生活矛盾的原因,再提出解决策略。 【思路拓展】 人们难以平衡工作和生活的原因解读: ①现代人对于生活的欲求更多,人,若想专业上脱颖而出,事业上高歌猛进,就要比常人努力,因此,一个人在工作中花费的时间越多,一个可以分配给家庭生活、健康管理和个人爱好的时间就越少。 ②工作狂的现象可以被归结为工作的压力和竞争的激烈,多数情况下,人想要事业中出类拔萃,就要奋发图强,因此,很多职场新人只能全心工作。 人们努力平衡工作和生活的解决策略: ① 企业应帮助职员缓压,建立理性的工作制,提倡健康的工作方式,毕竟,无论工作学习,勤奋高效才是我们应努力追求的。 ② 对于个人而言,我们应该转变心态,事业的成功不是人生唯一目的,努力工作是为了去创造和享受美好人生,但是,工作不应成为负累。无论多忙,人应牢记:家庭生活和健康管理也是重要的,我们不该把没有完成的工作带回家,也应规律运动、发展爱好、拓宽交友圈。小鹏哥摄影作品 【范文赏析】 【首段】 背景介绍 + 问题影响 + 写作目的 Alarmingly, there is a growing awareness that a great many employees findit hard to strike a proper balance between career and life, some people fail tocare about the health management and the cultivation of new hobby. The failureof tackling the tense relationship between career development and private lifewill have a really adverse influence. This essay aims to explore the reasons whyit is far from easy to perfectly balance the job and life and then presentsolutions 【解析】 1. Alarmingly, there is a growing awareness that …… 令人担忧的是,人们渐渐认识到…… 2. it is far from easy to do sth 做……很难 3. The failure of tackling the tense relationship between careerdevelopment and private life will have a really adverse influence.未能合理安排处理事业和个人生活的确带来很多不利影响。 【二段】人们难以平衡生活和事业的原因解读 The potential reasons of tense relationship between career and personallife are manifold. First, to zero in on career can be mainly owed to one’sinfinite desire for life. More precisely, many young people desire to outshineothers in their careers. To fulfill their rosy dreams, they have to workextremely hard. Thereby, the more time one spends on career, the less time onecan allocate to other activities such as family life, health management orpersonal hobbies. Also, excessive workload and fierce competition that is whynumerous young adults have to fully focus on jobs. More precisely,A new employeeis sure to be eliminated by the hot competition if he or she slackens efforts atself-improvement. 【解析】 1. To zero in on career can be mainly owed to one’s infinite desire forlife. 全心专注于事业可以被归结为人们对于生活的无尽渴望。 2. A new employee is sure to be eliminated by the hot competition if he orshe slackens efforts at self-improvement. 如果职场新人在自我提升方面有所放松,他注定会被激励的竞争所淘汰。 【三段】 人们努力平衡工作和生活的解决策略 Considering the conflict between career and life, it is high time that weadopted effective measures. Initially, it is imperative for the relevantcompanies to reduce the heavy workload and create healthy work style. Virtually,to popularize a reasonable mode of work not only brings happiness to the workersbut also enhances the efficiency of working. Also, efforts should be made byeveryone to change their opinion towards career. Specifically, people shouldclearly know that success in career will never be the sole aim of life, to workdiligently is to create and savor wonderful life. No matter how busy one mightbe, one should always bear in mind that family life tops all and he or sheshould never bring unfinished working tasks to home. 【解析】 1. Considering the conflict between career and life, it is high time thatwe adopted effective measures. 考虑到事业和生活的矛盾,我们理应采取一些有效的措施。 2. Also, efforts should be made by everyone to change their opinion towardscareer. 个人应该努力改变职业观。 3. To work diligently is to create and savor wonderful life.努力工作是为去创造和品位精彩人生。 4. Family life tops all. 家庭生活最重要 5. He or she should never bring unfinished working tasks to home.我们不应该把未完的工作带回家。 【尾段】 作家立场 In closing,my stand is that it is no easy task to keep a appropriatebalance between career and life at times, however, one should make efforts torealize this balance. 【解析】 1. in closing,my stand is that …… 总之,我的立场是…… 2. it is no easy task to do sth v做……绝非易事 3. at times adv 有时候 作者介绍: 薛鹏(),新东方网专栏作家,长春市作家协会会员。高中时代出版诗文集《选择坚强》,每年创作20万字原创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历),前长春新东方功勋教师,多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作8.0分,托福写作29分)。 爱生活,爱运动,爱音乐电影,爱旅行美食,爱读书摄影,更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台,主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各级别词汇教学。 大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军,全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。 对于各类写作课程有精深研究,授课方式行云流水,妙语连珠,知识底蕴深厚,对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。 教学理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水,而是点燃一把火)版权声明:本文系新东方网独家稿件,版权为新东方网所有。转载请注明来源和作者,否则必将追究法律责任。 编辑推荐: 更多内容请关注,也可扫码关注我们的微信公共账号或加QQ群168861834。 (编辑:秦洁)

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